My Hobby_1000字

I have many habits, but today I would like to share one of my habits to all of you. 　　I like raising fish. One of my most important thing is feeding fish. Every morning after I get up I usually go feeding my fish. First, I open a big box. Next I open a small bottle in the box. Then I open the bottle and take out a spoon of fish food and give the fish. After feeding one tank, I feed the other tank. I cannot feed too much or too less so fish won’t be uncomfortable. 　　Another important thing is to change the water for fish. I usually change the water for fish once a week so that they will not get sick. Sometimes my fish jumps out of the fish tank, so I have to use a net to catch them! I usually use the dirty water to water my plants because I can save water. It is good to our environment. 　　That is my habit– raising fish. It brings me much happiness. For example, my only koi fish, Susie, is my lucky fish. It accompanies me for near four years! I love Susie, I love my habit– raising fish. Can you tell me yours?

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I have many hobbies, but today I would like to share one of my hobbies with all of you. 　　

I like raising fish. One of my most important thing is feeding fish. Every morning I usually go feeding my fish after I get up. I cannot feed too much or too little so fish won’t be uncomfortable. Another important thing is to change the water for fish. I usually change the water once a week so that they will not get sick. And I usually use the dirty water to water my plants because I can save water. It is good to our environment. Sometimes my fish jumps out of the fish tank, so I have to use a net to catch them! 　　

That is my hobby– raising fish. It brings me much happiness. For example, my only koi fish, Susie, is my lucky fish. It has accompanied me for near four years! I love my raising fish. How about your hobby? Can you tell me yours?

六年级:杨晋

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